Behind Corneal Gates

Please check out David Morneau’s “Behind Corneal Gates.” He combined the text from my poem, “The Corneal Gates” with the text from William Shakespeare’s Sonnet no. 56. This is part of David’s new songwriting project, “Love Songs,” that pairs sonnets by William Shakespeare with contemporary poems. “Behind Corneal Gates” is the first piece from this series.

“Behind Corneal Gates” was performed at the Composer’s Voice Concert Series on Sunday, 9/26 at 1 p.m. at Jan Hus Church at 351 East 74th Street on Manhattan’s Upper East Side. David’s music is gorgeous. The voice of the soprano, Mary Hubbell, is like an angel’s. The performance moved me to tears.

For information, please check out David’s web site for upcoming performances at:

Behind Corneal Gates by David Morneau

Sonnet 56 / William Shakespeare

Sonnet 56
Sweet love renew thy force, be it not said
Thy edge should blunter be than appetite,

Which but to-day by feeding is allayed,

Tomorrow sharpened in his former might.
So love be thou, although to-day thou fill
Thy hungry eyes, even till they wink with fulness,
To-morrow see again, and do not kill
The spirit of love, with a perpetual dulness:
Let this sad interim like the ocean be
Which parts the shore, where two contracted new,
Come daily to the banks, that when they see:

Return of love, more blest may be the view.

Or call it winter, which being full of care,
Makes summer’s welcome, thrice more wished, more rare.

The Corneal Gates / Patricia Carragon

The Corneal Gates

You keep my image

Behind corneal gates.
I look closer,
See an hourglass
Where sand becomes
An endless beach –
Where a shell lies
Like a castaway.

I pick it up,
Hear thoughts sing,
Watch notes rise
Like fire’s breath.
I ask the wind
To send this song
To where dreams live
And wait for his eyes
To open the gates.


Published by: Patricia Carragon

Brooklyn writer and poet Patricia Carragon loves cupcakes, chocolate, cats, and haiku. Her publication credits include BigCityLit, CLWN WR, Clockwise Cat, Danse Macabre, Home Planet News, Inertia, Lips, Levure littéraire, Long Island Quarterly, Mad Hatters’ Review, The Mom Egg, The Toronto Quarterly, Word Salad, and others. She is the author of "Journey to the Center of My Mind" (Rogue Scholars Press, 2005) and "Urban Haiku and More" (Fierce Grace Press, 2010). Her latest books are "The Cupcake Chronicles" (Poets Wear Prada, 2017) and "Innocence" (Finishing Line Press, 2017). She hosts the Brooklyn-based Brownstone Poets and is the editor-in-chief of its annual anthology. Patricia is a member of brevitas, Pen Women's Literary Workshop, Women Writer's in Bloom,and Tamarind. She is one of the Executive Editors for Home Planet News Online. For more information, please check out her other website at: ---Performances --- ---Publications--- ---Series Schedule--- ---Bookstore--- ---Poetry Corner--- ---Online Reviews of My Books--- ---Follow Me on Goodreads--- ---Check Out My Author Page on--- Amazon.Com ---Become My Fan on ReverbNation--- ---Like My Page on FaceBook--- ----THE BROWNSTONE POETS READING SERIES:---- ---4th Saturday Readings (3rd Saturday if the 4th Saturday falls on a religious holiday). No reading in December. --Park Plaza Restaurant --220 Cadman Plaza West near Clark St. & Pineapple Walk, Brooklyn, NY 11201-- - 718 – 596 – 5900--- 2:30PM--- ---$5 donation---food/drink - Open Mic--- Take the A or C to High Street, 2 or 3 to Clark Street, R to Court Street, Borough Hall---

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